题型一：引语评论作文

2012 年 12 月 17 日 CET-4 作文真题

Part Ⅰ Writing (30 minutes)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of times.” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

2012 年 12 月 17 日 CET-4 作文真题

Part I Writing (30 minutes)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincoln’s famous remark, “Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong There is an old saying: where there is a will, there is a way. It tells us that a strong will is the most essential quality that anyone who wants to achieve success. It can contribute a lot to one’s success.

Although “All roads lead to Rome”, none of them is completely smooth. Our life is filled with obstacles which may make us feel so hopeless that we may choose to give up. At the crucial moment, strong will helps a lot. As a matter of fACT, the ability to work through difficult situation and unfortunate events with strong will can make one stronger and more capable. In other words, if we want to realize life’s goal, we must keep forging ahead with strong consciousness.

From what has been discussed above, we can see that the establishment of tough determination is of GREat importance to everyone. With a strong will, including our knowledge, we will be able to deal with any situation in our life. Whatever we do, as long as we s tick to and do not give up easily, we will realize the goal at last.

The Way to Success "Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration." And here comes our question, what is the way to success? A strong will and GREat efforts are the most essential two

keys to the door of success。 Why do people fail to achieve their goal? The reason is that most of them give up halfway due to their lack of a strong will once they encounter any difficulty. A man of a strong will always

sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Would Thomas Edison be such a GREat man in history if he had done nothing but possessing a strong will? We are all familiar with his story that he had tried one thousand kinds of materials before he finally made his GREat bulb light up.Without hard effort, Edison might have been a nobody. Without efforts, no one can succeed.

To sum up, a strong will and GREat efforts can help one open up the way to success. Where there is a will with efforts, there is a way.

万能文章结构与思路

第 1 段：引语引用+简单评论段

1 文章第一句话：直接引用引语

1.1.第一句的第一种写法： 名人名言

1“ .”Sb. once said.

2 Sb. once said，“ .”

3 I assume that you are familiar with the words of sb. , who once said, “ .”

我想你应该熟悉 sb.说过的一句话，他曾经说过：“ .”

1. 2 第一句的第二种写法： 俗语/常言/习语/成语/谚语

1 As the commonly-heard saying/idiom/proverb goes，“ .”

2 I assume that you are familiar with saying, which is commonly-heard , “ .”

我想你应该熟悉一句耳熟能详的俗语/常言习语/谚语，是这么说的：“ .”

2 文章第二句话：简化引语+表层评论

2.1 用自己的语言说明、解释抽象和凝练的引语，保持原意的同时，使之简洁易懂；

本句根据题目引语内容，自由发挥

2.2 对引语的表层含义进行评论：就引语的“事”说“事”，不要上升到人生哲理高度

It is obvious that …

文章第二句话写法 真题举例：

(1.2.1)Although four-hour seems to be quite a long time, it can help people chop down the tree more

smoothly and less laboriously in the rest two hours. (1.2.2) It is obvious that a full preparation can help

people enhance the efficiency of trees-chopping. [2011-12 月 CET6]

(1.2.1)Quitting smoking is so easy as long as you keep away from cigarettes. However, many people can

hardly resist the temptation of cigarette and then give up their attempt to quit smoking. (1.2.2) It is obvious

that no one can quit smoking with ease without strong will and determination. [2011-12 月 CET4]

第 2 段：意义阐述段

3. 文章第三句话：由表及里，提炼挖掘引语的深层含义

3.1 The saying/proverb/ sb’s remark aims at informing us of the significance of A.

3.2 Simple as the sentence may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy and informs us of

the significance of A.

4. 文章第四句话： 强调 A 的重要性

4.1 There is no denying that we can not emphasize the importance of A too much.

4.2 why does A. play an indispensable role in our life/ work/ pursuit of success ?

5. 文章第五句话： 论述 A 的重要性

5.1 A will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams more

rapidly. The more Communicative/Modest/ Honest /Cooperative/ Inclusive we are, the more likely

we are to build harmonious relationships and master more resources which is advantageous to

their success.

两个衍生体：ACTion & plan

ACTion will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams more

rapidly. The more ACTion we take, the more likely we are to accumulate experience, master skills

and get close to our destination.

Making plan will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams

more rapidly. The more detailed plan we make , the more likely we are to make full use of time,

enhance our work efficiency make full preparation for unexpected cases/

5.2 A is crucial for every individual. With its seemingly magic power, A can not only better

accelerate individuals' development, but serve as an efficient instrument for individuals to

change the world. [The consciousness of innovation/ Confidence/ Dream / Objective / Diligence]

5.3 Those who possess A are always admired and respected, because A may endow them with

more competence, chances, self-confidence to overcome difficulties and approach challenges.

Those people appear to possess a special charm, bringing to others hope, passion and surprise, and,

thus winning others' favor and trust. [A strong will/ Persistence/ Perseverance/Optimism

/Ppassion/ Enthusiasm/ Hope / Courage / Patience ]

6. 文章第六句话：举例论述 A 的重要性

6.1 Quite a few examples can be given to prove the importance of A. However, I can think of

no better illustration than the following one:

6.2 To further demonstrate the importance of A, I would like to take sb. as a case in point.

举例公式：

Sb. ,插入语, how could he/she do sth. without A ?

第三段：结合实际

7. 文章第七句话：铭记 A 的重要性

7.1 In view of the importance of A, we should always keep firmly/bear in mind that A will

exert a profound influence on our life/work/health/personality.

7.2 From my perspective, at no time should we ignore the importance of A.

8. 文章第八句话：采取具体行动，践行 A 的重要精神

8.1 Accordingly，we should foster the consciousness of A by doing sth.

Develop the habit of A in our work/daily life.

8.2 在日常生活/工作中，运用 A 来解决问题

Hence, what we must do is to to carry out a full investigation, set up a proper goal and draw

up a detailed plan before we take ACTions. [2011-12 月 CET6]

Hence, when confronted with difficulties and setbacks, we need to grit our teeth and stick to

the belief/faith that where there is a will, there is a way. [2011-12 月 CET4]

9. 文章第九句话： 名人名言，呼应主题

“ .”Sb. also once said.

常用名言警句：

1. Living without an aim is like sailing without an aim. Alexander Dumas (Davy de La Pailleterie, French Writer) 生活没有目标就像航海没有指南针. (法国作家大仲马. A.)

2. Genius only means hard-working all one’s life. ( Mendeleyer, Russian Chemist) 天才只意味着终身不懈的努力. (俄国化学家门捷列耶夫)

3. patience is bitter, but its fruit is sweet. (Jean Jacques Rousseau , French thinker) 忍耐是痛苦的,但它的果实是甜蜜的. (法国思想家卢梭. J. J.)

4. I am a slow walker, but I never walk backwards. (Abraham Lincoln , American president)

我走得慢，但我从不后退(美国总统林肯. A.)

5. Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily. (Friedrich Schiller, German Dramatist and poet). 只有有耐心圆满完成简单工作的人, 才能够轻而易举地完成困难的事. (德国剧作家, 诗人席勒. F.)

6. You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success. (Charles Chaplin , American ACTor ) 人你必须要对自己有信心，那是成功的秘诀(美国演员卓别林. C.)

7. Happiness lies not in the mere possession of money; it lies in the joy of achievement, in the thrill of creative effort. (Franklin Roosevelt , American president ) 成功不仅仅在于拥有钱，还在于成就带来的喜悦，和努力带来的兴奋(美国总统罗斯福. F.)

8. None of us is as smart as all of us. Winston Churchill 三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮~丘吉尔

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