四级作文解析（思思）

第一篇

As is graphically depicted in thecartoon, a young girl is talking with her mother. She says ironically, “Goodnews mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice!” Then, her mothersmiles and seems content with this result. Apparently, the cartoon aims toreveal the fACT that a majority of modern parents play an increasingly negativerole in their children’s growth.

第一段三句话，描写图中大体现象、细节描写对话内容和人物反应、揭示图画的目的。

There are several possible reasonsaccountable for this phenomenon（中心句）. To begin with, family in growingnumbers has only one child; therefore, parents oftentimes focus all theirattentions on that child and exert much pressure on him or her（原因一）. Moreover,numerous parents intend to realize their unfulfilled dreams by letting theirchildren learn what they failed to learn and apply for the college by whichthey failed to be accepted, because they have become richer and they believethat they have the power to make what they wanted and want come true now（原因二）. Forinstance, my uncle used to be a poor man and his dream that one day he wouldbecome a violinist was broken because of lack of money. But he made a fortuneby selling coals, and then forced his son, my younger brother to prACTiceplaying the violin. My brother was a huge fan of sports, but now he has to playviolin everyday unwillingly and ofter quarrels with their parents（举例：原来-然后-结局）.

To sum up, it is unreasonable for parents to controltheir children’s life（总结句）. In order to help them grow happilyand healthily, parents are supposed to communicate with their kids about whatthey are really interested in（建议一，目的句型）. Meanwhile, it is about time thatparents let their kids make their own choices（建议二，“是时候”句型）. Only inthese ways will children grow in a psychologically happy environment andrealize their own dreams.

写作第二篇

As is graphically depicted in thecartoon, modern life has been dominated by computers. No matter the young manis in the office, at home, and in his spare time, the only friend he has is acomputer. Even when he sleeps, what is in his dream is still the computer.Apparently, the cartoon aims to reveal the fACT that the computer has begun toplay a negative role in the modern life.

第一段三句话，第一句大体描写，第二句细节描写，第三句话揭示图画目的。

The reasons why modern people are tiedup with computers are as follows. To begin with, they have become increasinglybusier in making money; therefore, they need a quick way to outlet theirpressure and exhaustion and computer is their ideal companion. Moreover,computers can assist people to deal with complicated working stuff, makefriends, and entertain themselves because they have become growingly powerful andeverything else is linked with them. For instance, two decades ago, computerswere far from popular and people used them to to prACTice typing letters and dobasic works. However, with the Internet becoming pervasive, computers haveintegrated music, films, shopping, and everything we like into their worlds.Now, when we power on the all-mighty computers, what we want is out there forus.

第二段：中心句+两原因+一例子，原因句型先果后因和先因后果，思路是攻受各一个。

To sum up, this lifestyle isabsolutely imperfect. In order to lead a healthy life, we are supposed to domore exercises and expose ourselves to the tangible world. Meanwhile, it isabout time that we powered the computer off and talked with our friends andfamilily face-to-face. Only in these ways will modern life become more beautifulfor you and me.

最后一段总结+两建议+展望未来

写作第三篇

As is depicted graphically in thecartoon, a man is going to send his children to the school. His son does notwant to leave home and he says that he does not know why he has to attendschool since the phone in his hand already knows everything. Then, his fathersseems rather embarrassed and does not know how to reply. Apparently, thecartoon aims to reveal the fACT that kids in increasing numbers have wrongunderstanding of going to school.

第一段三句话，大体描写，细节对话和反应描写，以及图的目的。

There are several possible reasonsaccountable for this phenomenon. To begin with, modern parents have becomeincreasingly richer; therefore, they oftentimes buy phones to their kids whenkids are too young to use this tool in a right way. Moreover, these parentshave less time to educate their kids because they are occupied with their worksand busy in making money, making kids believe that phones are their bestfriends and teachers. Suppose you are a child, you can choose between two kindsof teachers. One is just in your hands and every time you have a question, youjust need to search for the answer through it; the other is in the school, andhe asks you to obey the rules, do homeworks, and solve problems by yourself.Which one will you choose? A child with no sufficient parental education andsuperior family background will definitely choose the former one.

第二段解释图中的现象的原因。中心句+两原因+一例子。这次写的是假设例子。

To sum up, parents are supposed totake immediate measures to control this trend. In order to help kids form goodhabit and healthy state of mind, parents ought not to buy phones to their kidsbefore these kids are mature enough to tell rights from wrongs. Meanwhile, itis high time that parents spent more time in educating and accompanying theirchildren. Only in these ways will modern kids have better understanding oflearning and growing up.

最后一段，总结+两建议+展望未来。