Topic:Eat out or eat at home?
Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people
prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer.
参考分析:
不要急于做出选择,先进行比较,然后根据情况选择:
去餐馆或者吃快餐的优缺点:方便、快捷、多种口味;昂贵、卫生可能得不到保障、快餐使人发胖;
在家吃饭的优缺点:干净、可以做出自己喜欢的口味、节省、与家人和朋友共同准备实物很开心;花费时间、可能做的没有餐馆那么好吃;
在不同的情况下会有不同的选择。周末休息应该跟家人在家里吃饭。与老朋友久别重逢应该找一家安静的餐馆……
范文:
选择在饭馆吃饭:
(1)节省时间,自己做饭很麻烦;
(2)能够品尝各种各样的美食;
(3)能够促进和朋友的感情。
Nowadays, some people like to eat at home and prepare food by themselves,
but others prefer to eat outside in restaurants or at food stands. As far as I
am concerned, I prefer to eat at home.(标准式开头,先阐述现今社会状况,再表达个人观点,开门见山)
Of course there are some advantages to eat out. Firstly, restaurants offer
a more comfortable environment to eat and the food there tastes more delicious
than home-cooked meals. In addition, eating at restaurants is a good way of
getting together with friends. People also do not need to worry about washing
dishes and cleaning. For people who are too busy to cook, eating out is
certainly an ideal(理想的)choice. Furthermore, for people do not know how to cook
and do not have someone to cook for them, eat out seems to be the only
choice.(本段是让步段,先讲在外吃的好处一个是舒适的环境美味的食物,另一个是给不会做饭和不知做饭给谁的人提供吃饭的条件)
However, I prefer to cook and eat and home. The main reason is that at
home, family members can prepare their meals and enjoying their food together,
which can enhance their relationships. Family members can talk, make jokes and
exchange feelings on current affairs with each other while preparing a meal.
Parents have a chance to communicate with their kids and keep track of what they
are thinking and doing; while children can learn to help with some household
tasks and develop intimacy(与父母增进感情)with their parents. Image that you and your
brothers and sisters help your mother to cook on a weekend, and enjoy the food
later on(稍后), and you feel everything is so
nice.(这是第一段论述在家吃好处是可以与家人增进感情种种,以自己为例子显得生动可信)
Another reason is that eating at home can save money. The same amount of
money that you spend on a meal in a restaurant can buy a lot more foods from a
supermarket. You can use the money saved to buy a new cloth, or attend a
concert.(本段是从经济方面来论述在家吃确实可行)
General speaking, eating out side is comfortable and convenient but eating
at home has more benefits. I prefer to eat at
home.(这篇文章是标准的议论文结构,没有特别华丽的语言,但是结构清晰论述完整,没有语法错误,这也是保分的必要条件)
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