导读：英语作文是同学们很容易失分的一个题目，失分原因主要集中在用词不准确、缺乏较高级词汇词组及句型的应用、存在中式英语的翻译。当然英语作文也有一个捷径——英语作文模板，有很多同学通过套用模板得到一个比较好的分数，但是同学们还是要多练习。下面长沙新东方的小编就给同学们分享一篇高考英语作文真题，各位同学可以多多练习。
第四部分 写作
第一节 应用文写作
66. 假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：
(1) 口语能力：
(2) 相关经验;
(3) 应聘目的。
注意：
(1) 词数80左右;
(2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【范文赏析】
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our
school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can
communicate well with native speakers of English. What’s more, I am kind and
friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.
I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve
my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.
Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【点评】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封申请信。
第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验;3. 应聘目的。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词、短语和句子：I’m writing to apply for…，a good command of
English，communicate with，get along with等。
第三步：根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句，本文时态应以现在时为主，人称为第一人称。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
第二节 读后续写
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
67. It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never
before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We
reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked
us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan
and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house
listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in
the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on
my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens,
while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was
impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really
cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he
said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by
myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses,
and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul
cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried
back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so
peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees,
and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a
beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
注意：
(1)所续写短文的词数应为l50左右;
(2)至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
(3)续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;
(4)续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
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Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.
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【范文赏析】
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned
to the left to avoid the little rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to
fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, “Hold on!” All of a sudden the
horse began to run. My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my
horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and
realized that we were way off the track.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out
and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house.
After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in
the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep.
As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a
night!
【点评】
读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。
通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。
根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my
horse.这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。
第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句呼应前文Uncle
Paul的叮嘱——不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。
续写时注意要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右;续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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