2018年高考上海卷英语作文
导读：英语作文是同学们很容易失分的一个题目，失分原因主要集中在用词不准确、缺乏较高级词汇词组及句型的应用、存在中式英语的翻译。当然英语作文也有一个捷径——英语作文模板，有很多同学通过套用模板得到一个比较好的分数，但是同学们还是要多练习。下面长沙新东方的小编就给同学们分享一篇高考英语作文真题，各位同学可以多多练习。
假设你是明启中学的高三学生卢平。学校英语报向高三学生进行征文，题目为my teachers。卢平也想投稿。具体要求是：
1.请你将认识的老师进行分类
2.具体描述每一类老师的特征
【点评】
2018年高考作文一定要注意以下几点：1.对于教师的分类一定要明确，不可含糊其词，杂糅交替;2.对于细节的阐述，一定要充分有条理，不可一两句话带过，也不可想起一点便任意写上，使整篇文章的内部凌乱不堪。将老师分类是第一层次，其次可将各类老师的具体特征按照教学方式，沟通方式等再具体分类阐述;3.对于分类阐述完成之后，一定要有自己的选择和之后的主题升华，将整篇文章的高度进行拔高，要体现观察之外的思考。
【范文赏析】
My teachers
On the path of pursuing knowledge, numerous teachers we have encountered may have a lifelong impact on us, and even contribute to shaping who we are. Looking back on my school life, my teachers can be generally classified into three types: dedicated, approachable, and irresponsible.
Dedicated teachers are most popular among students not only because of their outstanding professional knowledge but also because of their devotion to the career of teaching. You can expect more than class time of them. They may have a face-to-face communication with you after class to enlighten you with a tricky math problem. They may sacrifice their family time to keep you company so that you can smooth your emotional problem caused by your own family. Needless to say, most teachers fall into this category.
The second type of teacher may seem less qualified in terms of their teaching skills, but they can also easily win students’ hearts because they can be entrusted with our deepest secrets. Childhood and adolescence are awkward periods when we struggle to explore our own way in the world. Our peers may be just as inexperienced as us while our parents seemingly live on another planet. So a friendly adult like approachable teachers can be a life saver.
We tend to be careful when labeling a teacher irresponsible, but they do exist. Some of them may have temper issue, while others may disregard their own job. One of my teachers fit the deion, who was directly linked to my poor academic performance during his stint.
In the future, as my learning continues, I will have opportunities to meet more teachers. Whereas, never will I forget the assistance from my previous teachers or their passion for knowledge
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导读：英语作文是同学们很容易失分的一个题目，失分原因主要集中在用词不准确、缺乏较高级词汇词组及句型的应用、存在中式英语的翻译。当然英语作文也有一个捷径——英语作文模板，有很多同学通过套用模板得到一个比较好的分数，但是同学们还是要多练习。下面长沙新东方的小编就给同学们分享一篇高考英语作文真题，各位同学可以多多练习。
假设你是明启中学的高三学生卢平。学校英语报向高三学生进行征文，题目为my teachers。卢平也想投稿。具体要求是：
1.请你将认识的老师进行分类
2.具体描述每一类老师的特征
【点评】
2018年高考作文一定要注意以下几点：1.对于教师的分类一定要明确，不可含糊其词，杂糅交替;2.对于细节的阐述，一定要充分有条理，不可一两句话带过，也不可想起一点便任意写上，使整篇文章的内部凌乱不堪。将老师分类是第一层次，其次可将各类老师的具体特征按照教学方式，沟通方式等再具体分类阐述;3.对于分类阐述完成之后，一定要有自己的选择和之后的主题升华，将整篇文章的高度进行拔高，要体现观察之外的思考。
【范文赏析】
My teachers
On the path of pursuing knowledge, numerous teachers we have encountered may have a lifelong impact on us, and even contribute to shaping who we are. Looking back on my school life, my teachers can be generally classified into three types: dedicated, approachable, and irresponsible.
Dedicated teachers are most popular among students not only because of their outstanding professional knowledge but also because of their devotion to the career of teaching. You can expect more than class time of them. They may have a face-to-face communication with you after class to enlighten you with a tricky math problem. They may sacrifice their family time to keep you company so that you can smooth your emotional problem caused by your own family. Needless to say, most teachers fall into this category.
The second type of teacher may seem less qualified in terms of their teaching skills, but they can also easily win students’ hearts because they can be entrusted with our deepest secrets. Childhood and adolescence are awkward periods when we struggle to explore our own way in the world. Our peers may be just as inexperienced as us while our parents seemingly live on another planet. So a friendly adult like approachable teachers can be a life saver.
We tend to be careful when labeling a teacher irresponsible, but they do exist. Some of them may have temper issue, while others may disregard their own job. One of my teachers fit the deion, who was directly linked to my poor academic performance during his stint.
In the future, as my learning continues, I will have opportunities to meet more teachers. Whereas, never will I forget the assistance from my previous teachers or their passion for knowledge
延伸阅读：
@高三生，高考复习我有这些建议...
@高三生，高考复习我有这些建议...
