第四部分 写作(共两节，满分35分)

　　第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文

　　中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或

　　修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　When Mr. Mill was young, his purpose in learning was to be teacher. Now he is a learning professor* One morning, Mr. Mill had had some pork and lemon tea as

　　breakfast. Then he puts on his leather glove to go to the classroom. He leaned on the chair but began his lecture at leisure. He explained the legal rights of the people for a long time. Nothing was left out. The topic. lent itself to discussion. Before discussion,the students came to understand itself at last.Before the class were over, Mr. Mill asked the students if they were freely these days. He suggested they read at least one book on the legal rights,

　　第二节书面表达(满分25分)

　　世界杯预选赛亚洲区赛第6轮，中国对阵韩国的比赛3月23号在长沙展开。比赛第

　　33分钟，于大宝头球破门!凭借他的这个球，中国队夺得宝贵的1分!最终，中国队1：0战胜韩国!

　　假定你是李华，在肴完比赛后，给外国朋友Peter发一封电子邮件，简单介绍于大宝：