中国学生的雅思写作分数平均为5.32分，也就意味着绝大多数考生的雅思作文分数局限在5分到5.5分之间，甚至很多人会一直卡在5.5这个坎上，始终拿不到卑微的写作单项6分。很多烤鸭都面临这样的难题，其中更不乏有一些阅读听力可以拿到8分左右的大牛级人物。这到底是个什么魔咒? 其实你真的懂，什么是5分的大作文吗？小编今天以考官给出的5分大作文为例，来解读这个迷题。

雅思写作评分标准中关于5分作文的评定标准如下：

1.对于任务的回应

只是部分回应题目要求，格式在有的地方不得体

有立场，但论证并不总是清晰，可能没写结论

提出了一些主要观点，但这些观点有限，论证不够充分;可能有无关细节

2. 连贯与衔接

信息的呈现有些组织，但缺少整体延续性

有某些不合适的拓展内容

3. 词汇资源

有单词的重复或错误

没有多变的资源展现

4.  只能使用有限的句型

试图使用复杂句，但准确度不如简单句

语法和标点经常错误，这些错误导致阅读部分困难

我们现在来看这篇考生的范文，和评分标准进行对应。

What knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many years. Some people think that the true function of universities provide knowledge for their own purpose, but nowadays,more and more people point out that universities should provide graduates knowledge and skills according to the workplace.

The first reason for universities should provide these knowledge and skill is the students’needs. Obviously, the most of the students go to university purpose of is to get some knowledge

And skills which could make them have the ability to get a job. If a university does not provide these knowledge and skills, the students might not get a job and they would be very disappointed. As a result, the university would lose its students.

Moreover, providing knowledge and skills needed in the workplace maks a university proGREss. the new skills and information always are initiated in the workplace, so focusing on the needs of the workplace the university could get sound strategies to do research and make it more mordeniSATion.

Lastly, providing these knowledge and skills could benefit our country which usually gives a financial support to universities. Having these knowledge and skills, students are more easy to get a job, and this can make our countries’ economy strong.

In conclusion, it can be said that providing the knowledge and skills which the workplace needs is every universities’ basic function.

文章一边倒的讨论了这篇文章中的一个观点，即大学应教会学生工作中需要的知识和技能，忽略了题目要求：讨论双方观点并给出自己意见， 并没有覆盖到所有的问题；且文章的段落结构有乱入的部分。但是还是清楚的给出了自己相应的观点和理由，进行了部分拓展，虽然有些部分被认为是不合适的，比如第二点的让大学取得更多进步这个点，就没有很好的佐证；第三点，带来经济效益，也没有有力的支持；词汇部分，有很多的单词拼写错误和单词的错用，所以分数必然不高，而且知识技能这一组词出现了9次之多，考官已忍无可忍；句法方面，简单句的处理还不错，偶尔有些小错，但复杂句的使用却很不如人意，更何况句子语法和标点时有错误，并且会影响到文章意思的表达。果然，考官给出的详细评价如下：

Band 5

This answer is less than 250 words and it does not address all parts of the question, so it loses marks. Nevertheless, some relevant ideas and a position on the issue are presented. Ideas are organized and the structure of the answer is clearly signaled. Paragraphing is not always logical, however. There is some good use of linkers, but there is also a lot of repletion due to inadequate use of referencing and substitution. The high level of repetition “knowledge and skills” is repeated nine times also indicates limitations in the range of vocabulary although, apart from language given in the rubric, there is just sufficient additional vocabulary for the task. The answer includes attempts at complex sentence forms, but these are generally awkwardly phrased and tend to require some re-reading to understand. Nevertheless, there are examples of accurate complex structures.

综上所述，我们发现，想要让大作文的分数稳步提升，进而确保自己的文章总分能跨过6分的这个坎，我们需要从以下几个方面着手：

1. 理清题目意图，尽量COVER到题目的每一个分支，并给出自己清晰的观点

2. 条理清晰的论证和展开自己的观点

3. 保证自己用的单词是对的，如果还有余力，尝试进行改变，切忌用复杂词，却用错

4. 句子的正确性，保证要有一些对的复杂句。

当我们很好的解决了这几个问题，再远离害人不倦的模版时，魔咒自然会解开。

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