2020雅思写作task1范文实例：年龄分布
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Task1:The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.
参考范文：
The two charts compare the populations of France and India in terms of age distribution by gender in the year 1984.
It is clear that the population of India was younger than that of France in 1984, with a noticeably larger proportion of people aged under 20. France, on the other hand, had a significantly larger percentage of elderly inhabitants.
In India, close to 14% of people were aged 5 or under, and each five-year age bracket above this contained an increasingly smaller proportion of the population. France’s population, by contrast, was more evenly distributed across the age ranges, with similar figures (around 7% to 8% of all people) for each five-year cohort between the ages of 0 and 40. Somewhere between 10% and 15% of all French people were aged 70 or older, but the equivalent figure for India was only 2%.
Looking more closely at gender, there was a noticeably higher proportion of French women than men in every cohort from age 50 upwards. For example, almost 3% of French 70- to 75-year-olds were women, while just under 2% were men. No significant gender differences can be seen on the Indian population chart.
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导读：雅思考试写作task1想要达到9分需要完全满足所有的写作任务要求、清晰地呈现充分展开的写作内容;衔接手段运用自如，行文连贯，;熟练地运用分段;能自然地使用并掌握复杂的词汇特征;极少出现轻微错误，且仅属笔误，灵活且准确地运用丰富多样的语法结构;极少出现轻微错误，完全满足所有的写作任务要求，清晰地呈现充分展开的写作内容，有想要在雅思考试中得到写作高分的同学，长沙新东方为你准备了一则协作范文，分享给学生进行日常练习。
Task1:The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.
参考范文：
The two charts compare the populations of France and India in terms of age distribution by gender in the year 1984.
It is clear that the population of India was younger than that of France in 1984, with a noticeably larger proportion of people aged under 20. France, on the other hand, had a significantly larger percentage of elderly inhabitants.
In India, close to 14% of people were aged 5 or under, and each five-year age bracket above this contained an increasingly smaller proportion of the population. France’s population, by contrast, was more evenly distributed across the age ranges, with similar figures (around 7% to 8% of all people) for each five-year cohort between the ages of 0 and 40. Somewhere between 10% and 15% of all French people were aged 70 or older, but the equivalent figure for India was only 2%.
Looking more closely at gender, there was a noticeably higher proportion of French women than men in every cohort from age 50 upwards. For example, almost 3% of French 70- to 75-year-olds were women, while just under 2% were men. No significant gender differences can be seen on the Indian population chart.
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