2016年高考上海卷英语作文
导读：今年上海高考英语作文是一篇图表题，题目中已明确要求作文内容上必备的两个部分，第一是要对图表的数据有一个简要的描述，第二是要分析数据产生的原因。此类作文的重心的比较多的篇幅应该是放在原因的分析上，并且在陈述原因时，注重文章结构的分层和逻辑的通畅。长沙新东方高考频道摘取了一篇优秀作文，供各位同学参考、学习。
书面表达
假设你是中华中学的一名中学生，最近你正在参与一个研究性学习研究调查，调查题目为“关
于父母是否对孩子感到骄傲”
1.简要描述这些数据; 2.分析该原因。
父母: 对孩子感到骄傲 80%
孩子: 认为父母对自己感到骄傲60%
【范文赏析】
A survey conducted recently indicates that the parents who are proud of their children are twenty percent more than the children who consider themselves as prides of their parents.
There exist two reasons, which may account for : this subtle difference. First, conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their kids. This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of self-confidence. Second, the current educational system excessively emphasizes the value of academic per formance, thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud. This bias unfa irly undermines the significance of talents forart and sports, which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves.
Without the genuine encouragement from parents and reversal of exam-oriented educational methods, a kid would never end up with a positive grown-up.
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导读：今年上海高考英语作文是一篇图表题，题目中已明确要求作文内容上必备的两个部分，第一是要对图表的数据有一个简要的描述，第二是要分析数据产生的原因。此类作文的重心的比较多的篇幅应该是放在原因的分析上，并且在陈述原因时，注重文章结构的分层和逻辑的通畅。长沙新东方高考频道摘取了一篇优秀作文，供各位同学参考、学习。
书面表达
假设你是中华中学的一名中学生，最近你正在参与一个研究性学习研究调查，调查题目为“关
于父母是否对孩子感到骄傲”
1.简要描述这些数据; 2.分析该原因。
父母: 对孩子感到骄傲 80%
孩子: 认为父母对自己感到骄傲60%
【范文赏析】
A survey conducted recently indicates that the parents who are proud of their children are twenty percent more than the children who consider themselves as prides of their parents.
There exist two reasons, which may account for : this subtle difference. First, conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their kids. This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of self-confidence. Second, the current educational system excessively emphasizes the value of academic per formance, thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud. This bias unfa irly undermines the significance of talents forart and sports, which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves.
Without the genuine encouragement from parents and reversal of exam-oriented educational methods, a kid would never end up with a positive grown-up.
延伸阅读：
@高三生，高考复习我有这些建议...
@高三生，高考复习我有这些建议...
